Just over a week ago, I sent the proposed information letter for study III (which is intended to go out to association members and which I have produced in dialogue with MG, OJ and SI) to a handful of selected people from the target group. The proposed mail text looked initially like this and after some feedback like this. After correspondence both via email and by telephone, the feedback I received can be summarized as follows:
It was partly about the fact that it was not clear enough that Bostadsförsöket and Evaluation of Bostadsförsöket were two different things. In addition, clarifications were requested that the evaluation study consisted of two parts. Furthermore, the language was considered to contain unnecessarily complicated words such as funktionsrättsrörelsen. In addition, the sentences were in many cases considered too long and thus difficult to read. I will now take this into account and draft a new proposal which I will send to OJ, MG and SI for final comments.